Gotzen-Dammerung's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zoley returns]

eh

This one was actually pretty good, but you need to work on your plots and put more work into your stuff. Your voices suck.

Remember I was one of the people who was didding your cartons in "Zoley" well I've finished a cartoon. You should check it out "the Stare off" I'll let you bethe judge of it.

Mr-dude-2nd responds:

lol I watched your flash I liked it, but As you said I need to work on my plots. I can't write plots my storys suck too bad. So i just make this crap. Well thanks for the review.

[The Silent Debate]

maybe

You are a pretty good artist but you need:
Better voice actors (or just captions)
better music
and most importantly of all, animating skills (like movement)

P.S. when the guy's head moved up at the end when he was talking to the boy. His head rises off his shoulders.

ryer responds:

GREAT! Thanks for the advice!

[Renaissance]

HOLY CRAP

This deserves a spot on the best animations ever section. On a side note. The part where he drops the coffee, well in real life a cop or civilan would come and tell them to pick that up.

AloneInTheDark responds:

Lol

[Lonely Soilder]

...

The drawings were good but everything else sucked.

Brimock responds:

ouch, thanks for ur review

[Aol Man: Prologue]

Sorry

It wasn't that good compared to your other one. This is just wierd and confusing. Nice concept by the way. Also Aol man has a heavy black outline. When the camera zooms in on the pop up for a free credit card Loa man is yellow but then he is blue. I thought you were going to try harder now, but you're just animating like me.

DossMan01 responds:

Well your stupid sorry. But good try next time. Really Sorry just kidding. I'm telling you the next one will be so much beter.

[Mr. Explodeo]

It sucked

I don't understand what everyone sees in your cartoons. This one sucked! Sure you drew a robot; sorta, so who is Mr. Explodeo? Great name by the way; Mr. Explodeo, that is so original. Dude you should've stayed in school, yoou know what, I'll pay for you're education cause you really need it.

Mr-dude-2nd responds:

Im still in school. So I think you should check out my info before you review stuff. Good luck with flash. Im a nice guy.
HAVE A NICE DAY!!!

[Zoley]

ABSOLUTE CRAPP!!!

The drawings sucked, the animation sucked, I gave the violence a 2 because there was some blood, there was no sound except for that crappy; annoying song in the backround, there was no story whatsoever, the gun shop was a castle with a drawing of a tree in it, there is no sort of "killing spree" he kills a guy with a rock and shoots three random people, the rain turns on and off at times, and he gets stopped by two guards after entering a castle; not a jail, next to a house. This was CRAP! I've seen stuff a thousand times better that was blammed seconds after it got on!

Mr-dude-2nd responds:

Its nice to know what you think. I would like to know what you can make with flash. Whenever you try flash email me so I can see if you can do any better. Anyway I made it in just 6 hours man I was goofing around. Well anyway if you ever try flash tell me and we will see if you can do better.